Thursday, April 26, 2012

Use Your Mood! Writing Based on How You Feel


An interesting thing happened to me this morning. In only a few minutes I went from being sad about some news I was given to ecstatic because of some praise I received from my boss. During this change my inclination to write certain scenes in a certain way shifted entirely, too.  

The curious little bug that I am, this lead me to question my methods. I began analyzing my personal habits and why it is that my inclination shifted. I wanted to know what the connection was between that shift and my writing style. I am a non-linear writer, you see. Most things I write do not fall into a straight line. My writings do not seamlessly blend to form the greater whole. Instead, they are more stitched together like a patchwork quilt.  

This morning got me thinking: why is this the manner in which I write? Can the answer behind my writing style benefit others in some way? After some critical thinking and analyzing, I came up with this: 

When writing, one of the most important tools I use is my moods. I take advantage of my emotional state and bond it to a scene that matches. When sad, I pull a sad scene from my stack of cards and write that. When happy-rosy, I search for a fun or comedic scene and go to town. When over-stimulated thanks to coffee or Coca-Cola (which I am overly addicted to, just so you know,) I reach for a fight scene and type as fast and furiously as my fingers will allow. 

As well, I do not push myself into a scene I cannot relate to simply to ensure everything goes in proper order. If sad, I do not try and force myself to write a happy scene. When happy, I do not force the sad. And so it goes. Writing something I cannot put myself into feels like wasting time, effort and energy. 

Using my moods as strengths helps with creativity, avoiding burn-out, and even end-product. Beta boy can tell what kind of mood I was in when I wrote a particular piece just by the tone and quality of the writing. For example: my sense of humor is extremely blunt. Beta boy says that if my comedy doesn’t “punch him in the face” then I obviously wasn’t in the proper mood to write jokes. He also says that if I’m in the wrong mood to write a certain scene that the scene comes out as seeming forced or rushed. 

That being said, I challenge all of you to sit down and really think about what kind of mood you are in. Use that mood as the basis for what you write in that moment. See if the feel of the writing is better, the same or worse. Do your words flow well, or are you so overwhelmed by your current moment that you feel stumped? Are you more satisfied both with the act of writing itself and/ or with your end-product? Have you learned anything about yourself by analyzing your emotions and how they affect your writing? 

As always, I’d love to hear feedback on the subject. I’m always curious about the experiences others have during their writing journey. Thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to comment and, as well, thanks in advance to anyone who takes the time to read my words. 

Until Next Time,


-R

Friday, April 20, 2012

The Effects of Your Character's Physical Environment



Emotions signal to individuals and to others how an interaction with the world is faring. At the same time emotions provide the basis for interaction. When people are happy, they engage in what they are doing. They tend to become creative and cooperate with others. By contrast when people are unhappy they are thrown back upon themselves. They no longer flourish in their interactions. Emotions have a strong impact on who we are and the choices we make.

Many elements such as past history, current events, physical health and relationships can assist in designing your character’s emotional state. There’s one element that seems to go largely unnoticed. I’d like to focus on that today.

It is a character’s physical environment.

Studies show that the environment in which people (meaning your character) reside is yet another component in what makes us us. For instance, a character who spends most of his or her time in a basement and does not necessarily receive much daylight is more prone to depression than a character who spends most of his or her time in the sun. A character who actively rides a bike or walks to his or her destination will likely be more energetic and positive than a character who drives everywhere.

I can discuss this topic for ages, but to keep things on the short and sweet side I’ll limit the topic to five quick questions. If you feel inclined, try considering these questions as you develop your character. Hopefully some of this will help you as you go about creating new literary life.


     How characters see: What is it your character sees the most? Day lit views that provide a necessary relief and help with focus and attention span? Or dark places that promote insecurity, depression and self-doubt?

How characters hear: What are the acoustics like where your character is? Is there a difficulty in hearing, leading to a negative attitude about the current situation he, she or they are in? Can they hear clearly, giving them time to digest the emotions resulting from what they heard and react accordingly?

     How characters breathe: How is the air quality of your character’s immediate surroundings? Is the air quality poor, leaving the character less inclined to attend work or school? Are there toxins in the air such as VOCs that negatively impacts his or her health and, indirectly, his or her mood? Or is the air quality good, leading your character to want to actively participate in his or her environment?

      How characters feel: Is the humidity in the air moderate and naturally vented, leading to your character’s desire to over-achieve? Or is the humidity uncomfortable, leading to laziness and apathy?

     How characters move: Does your character take the bus or ride a bike? This will lead to an increase in energy, focus and overall happiness. How often do they travel outside in the fresh air and how much does this affect their level of positivity?

I challenge you to ask yourselves these five questions during your character development phase. Delve into their physical psyche. See what you come up with. Couldn’t hurt, right?

Also, if you’d like to learn more about the effects of the physical environment on emotional development, or for a list of reading material, feel free to contact me: randi.lee@mail.com

   
Until next time,

R

Sunday, April 15, 2012

Recognizing Others, Not Just Myself


I follow a lot of blogs because I love reading what fellow writers have to say. Finding the words of my peers both educational and endearing [as I’m reading and writing with kindred spirits] I try to dedicate a good amount of time each week to “camping” certain blogs- checking my reading list until I see that one of them has an update. 

One thing I have noticed, not only through my own experience but through the experiences of others, is that beginning a blog and attaining an audience isn’t exactly the easiest thing to do. There are so many people posting in the world of the word that gaining recognition is often exceedingly difficult.

That is why I am most happy to say that I officially have 16 followers now! I know, I know… to some of you that number is small potatoes, but to me it’s an army and I appreciate every person who has clicked the little Join This Site button or reads along silently.

But the true point of today’s post is to recognize and promote one individual blogger who I feel deserves some extra notice. She’s a close friend and fellow author named Paige Lollie.

Paige is a new writer working on her first full-length novel. Despite her recent introduction to “professional writing,” she has been writing other stories and prose for years. In the 5+ years we’ve known each other, her writing has never let me down.

She also has both a unique way of writing and an interesting point of view. Often my perspective changes based on what she has to say, meaning her words are always teaching me new things. To my small audience, I recommend you take Paige's blog for a spin.

Again, it is often difficult to build a “fan base” which is why, from time to time, I’m going to promote blogs that I like. An important part of being noticed is networking, right? Right. And any little bit I can do to help my fellow writers succeed is a step I’ll happily take.

As always, thanks for taking the time to read what I have to say. It is most appreciated.

Until next time,

-R




  

Friday, April 13, 2012

A Visual View of My Creative Process

Hello, friends! I hope all of you have been swell. As for me? As Tony the Tiger would say: “I’m grrrrrrrrreat!” I’ve been busy editing Lightbringer and am already up to chapter three of Flip Side. Feeling nothing but accomplished this week, I wondered what I could post about aside from saying “I feel awesome!” for several redundant paragraphs. Then a friend of mine suggested making a picto-post this week. She said taking some photos of my creative process and sharing them with you might be fun. I agree! Visuals are always a great way to share what makes you you. Without further ado, here’s a look at my life as a writer.


DESK
 

Desk is the starting point of it all. Whenever I write random notes at work, in the carpool or at a restaurant I dump all of them here to make sense of later. In the beginning it is difficult to sift through, but eventually I get into a groove and the notes get [for the most part] sorted.

Bag of Notes

Bag of notes is a great tool because it divides notes ‘a’ and notes ‘b’ into two stacks. Notes ‘a’ equals all of the current musings for my work-in-progress, while notes ‘b’ equals the musings I’ve written for future works. Like an emerging butterfly, Bag of Notes eventually becomes Desk.

Sticky Journal
Depending on its color and location on the journal’s page, the pages of Sticky Journal hold a different meaning. Stickies on the top, for example, pertain to the action, details and plot of my WIP. Stickies on the side pertain to my upcoming project[s] and stickies on the bottom are for my food journal as I’m really bad at keeping myself fed properly.


Stack of Journals

These are the ones I can find. Since they're at the bottom of my desk I often forget I have important information written in them and need to backtrack. I suppose this is the one area where my creative process can improve...
 

Note Cards

The cards, the cards! I love these things! They are a really, really big help. I transfer items from Desk, Sticky Journal and Stack of Journals onto the cards [action, facts, plot, etc.] and organize them by color and then by Sharpie color. I then lay them all out and make sure I’m not missing any important details. It also helps me put the scenes and chapters into proper order so that I can then transfer them to the computer, which is always a good thing.

So, friends, that’s my way of doing things. How about you? How do you transform what’s in your mind to method? I’m interested in finding out-! Perhaps through the sharing of methods we can help each other organize the madness that is our writing lives.

Thanks in advance for any comments you provide, and thanks to all of my silent readers as well.

Until next time,
R

Sunday, April 8, 2012

April 2012 Blog Chain Entry: POOF


Today’s post equals my entry for Absolute Write’s April 2012 Blog Chain. Each month members of the forum participate in a series of blog entries all related to one central theme. It helps with blog hit rate, community and is overall just plain fun to do.

April’s topic is, curiously enough, ‘dead bunnies.’ Well, then. Those of you who know me in real life already know the exact spin I’m going to put on this topic. For those of you who don’t… enjoy.  

POOF: A Five Minute One Act


[Lights up. Rich and Cliff stand in a kitchen in front of a plain table surrounded by three chairs. They’re looking at an indiscernible object on the table’s surface.]         
Rich:    “I told you not to feed it after midnight!”
Cliff:     “I thought that was gremlins?”
Rich:    “Well, them too! What are we going to do with it?”
Cliff:     “Set it on fire?”
Rich:    “No fires.”
Cliff:     “Why not?”
Rich:    “Because it’ll stink up the whole neighborhood and everyone’ll know what we did!”
Cliff:     “Oh, right. We could always say it spontaneously combusted.”
Rich:    “And why would a bunny spontaneously combust?”
Cliff:     “Because we fed it after midnight, duh.”
[Beat.]
Rich:    “Can you please just go home? I’ll figure this out on my own.”
Cliff:     “I can’t.”
Rich:    “Why not?”
Cliff:     “The bunny swallowed my keys before it croaked.”
Rich:    “What the- how in the world did it get a hold of your keys?”
Cliff:     “I don’t know-! Maybe the same way you bought a damn bunny you can’t feed after midnight!”
Rich:    “Well, I guess the only way to get your keys back is to set it on fire.”
Cliff:     “I thought you said no fires?”           
Rich:    “That was before my recently deceased pet swallowed your car keys, leaving you stuck here, leaving me stuck with you.”
Cliff:     “Hey now, I’m not so bad. I made you that sandwich earlier-!”      
Rich:    “No, you did not make me a sandwich. You threw a piece of stale bread on a plate and then asked me to borrow season six of ‘Curb Your Enthusiasm.’”
Cliff:     “What? It’s a good show!”
Rich:    “God!”
[Beat.]
Rich:    “Can’t you walk home?”
Cliff:     “I could, but then I wouldn’t be able to use your DVD player to watch this show. I broke mine.”
Rich:    “How?”
Cliff:     “Got drunk and hit it with a bowling trophy.”
Rich:    “Of course you did.”
[Beat.]
Rich: “Okay, listen, here’s what we’re going to do: Jerry gets off work soon and he’ll know how to solve this. We’re going to stick this thing in the freezer and wait for him to come over.”
Cliff:     “Why wait for Jerry?”
Rich:    “Because he’s really smart. He’ll figure this out.”
Cliff:     “Ten bucks says he tells us to set it on fire.”
Rich:    “I’ll pay for the cab. And the tip.”
[Rich places the bunny in the freezer. The two men sit at the table for a short period of time. Enter Jerry. Rich takes the bunny out of the freezer and places it on the table.]
[Beat.]
Jerry:   “You fed it after midnight, didn’t you?”
Cliff:     “Man, you’re right. This guy is super smart.”
Jerry:   “Not really. I just listened to the instructions when we bought it from that crazy old Chinese guy. [Beat.] If I remember correctly, he said don’t get it wet, don’t feed it after midnight, and don’t set it on fire if it dies.”
Rich:    “See! I told you we shouldn’t set it on fire!”
Jerry:   “It would stink an awful lot. And we’d probably have to clean up the fire pit after it burns up.”
Cliff:     “Aw, man! I hate cleaning. Can’t we find a way to get rid of it that doesn’t require manual labor?”
Rich:    “I’m not sure that’s possible, Cliff. Doing anything with this rabbit is going to       require moving in some form or another.”
Cliff:     “Why can’t you do it? It’s your pet.”
Rich:    “Oh, no. You’re the one that killed it. You’re helping us get rid of it.”
Cliff:     “Damn it-! All I wanted was one day of being completely lazy and then this stupid mystical bunny has to come along, swallow my keys, eat after midnight and die and ruin everything!”
Jerry:   “Wait, did you say it swallowed your keys?”
Cliff:     “Yeah, a few hours before I fed it.”
Jerry:   “Hmm… That makes things a little more difficult. We’re going to have to resort to desperate measures if you want them back.”
Rich:    “What’s your plan, then?”
Jerry:   “We do the only thing we can do: We set it on fire.”
Cliff:     “That’s ten bucks you owe me, dude.”
Rich:    “You know what? Screw this. If you need me I’ll be at the bar.”
[Exit Rich.]
Jerry:   “Yeesh. What crawled up his butt?”
Cliff:     “I’m not sure. I think he’s pissed he wasted $8.00 on that Bunny when he could have paid for a month of Netflix with the money.”
Jerry:   “Hmm… I suppose I’d be pretty pissed if that happened, too.”
[Beat.]
Cliff:     “Hey, wanna go watch ‘Curb Your Enthusiasm?’”
Jerry:   “I thought you’d never ask.”

So, that’s that. I hope you are at least mildly entertained by this work as it’s another one of my twenty-minute-or-less jobs. Also! If you find this story amusing and would like to read some great entries, check out the April 2012 Blog Chain participant list below. There are some excellent reads in there that I absolutely recommend.

Unit next time!

-R


April 2012 Blog Chain List of Participants
dclary - http://www.davidwclary.com/ (link to this month's post)
randi.lee - http://emotionalnovel.blogspot.com (link to this month's post)
Turndog-Millionaire - http://turndog-millionaire.com/ (link to this month's post)
julzperri - http://www.fishandfrivolity.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
Penelope - http://poet-slash-writer.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
AFord - http://af12.webs.com/ (link to this month's post)
Araenvo - http://plottypus.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
areteus - http://lurkingmusings.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
magicmint - http://www.loneswing.com/ (link to this month's post)
writingismypassion - http://charityfaye.blogspot.com (link to this month's post)
Whisky - http://nopart2.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
Anarchicq - http://anarchicq.com/ (link to this month's post)
Ralph Pines - http://ralfast.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
Joliedupre - http://www.preciousmonsters.com/ (link to this month's post)
Tomspy77 - http://thomaswillamspychalski.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)
Bogna - http://bemaslanka.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)

Friday, April 6, 2012

I Told You I Wasn’t Finished


Well, friends, I said I wasn’t finished with my emotional journey and I can now concretely say that I most certainly am not. Because of my work-in-progress my emotional range has fluctuated through every part of the spectrum over this past week, and it shows no sign of stopping.

This does not mean I am feeling negative- on the flip side, I’m actually feeling quite positive despite the every-now-and-then cranky mood swings. To better elaborate on why I’m feeling so up, down, left and right, allow me to start right where my last post left off…last Friday night.

I was so super excited that night because I’d previously written the very last line of my novel. You saw [err…read] me! I bought the new car, equated it to starting a new book, finished up my first draft, got ready for both editing and novel number two and everything was happy rosy.

Then Saturday morning came. Before my eyelids were even afforded the opportunity to open, my need for perfection kicked in. Suddenly both the final line and the final chapter of my work-in-progress were no longer up to par. The chapter I’d slaved over for I-don’t-know-how-long was not good enough anymore; if the story was going to end right I knew that I had to scrap what I’d done and start from scratch.

I could do leagues better, I knew it! (Fellow writers, I’m sure you understand and can relate to this sensation all too well.) So I hunkered down for the majority of the weekend and, finally, on Sunday night I had a new product that I was more than happy with!

Ever so proud of the new final chapter- especially the last line- I sent it off to my beta boy for his review and consideration. Everything inside of me knew that my last line was killer and he was going to praise me left and right for my literary genius.

His reply? “I’m annoyed.”

My first response was, “Huh?” He explained why the new chapter did not work, whined about the closure it did not provide and said I’d opened up a big old can of plot holes. It didn’t hit me until about thirty seconds after the explanation that my genius was no genius at all.

Needless to say, I wasn’t in the best mood after that.

It hurt me that he didn’t like it, I’ll admit, but the thing that hurt the most was that, after re-reading it, I knew he was right. I’d removed the closure the previous draft provided and inserted new information that caused the storyline to fall apart. Despite how wonderful I thought this new attempt was, it simply was not going to work.

Today is Tuesday and I am feeling much better about this. I have a new idea for the last chapter and have been jazzed up about it all day. In fact, I went and picked up Chinese food at lunch. This wonderful idea came to me while in the restaurant and needed to jot it down. The problem was that I had no paper and left my phone in the office so I couldn’t use the voice recorder. To make sure I didn’t lose the idea, I wrote it down on the back of my Chinese food receipt!

I want to wait and see where my emotions take me over the next few days, so I will finish this entry Friday morning and post on my regular schedule. Will my third attempt work? I hope so. But I will not be so devastated if it doesn’t. All I can do is re-write it and hope it comes out right this time. Either way, I’m actually excited to try again and see what this brain of mine comes up with next!

UPDATE: Friday

This morning I would once again like to start off by returning to last Friday and the state I was in. Chipper and happy rosy, I was ready to begin novel number two. This past week wrestled to steal that positivity away from me, and I feverishly swam against the tide of disappointment and insecurity as it did.

Today, I am pleased to say that my feelings perfectly mirror the feelings I experienced last Friday, and here’s why: I finished another re-write. This time I sat down with a list of items I wanted to close out, a list of questions I did not yet want to answer, and a timeline that lead me to a new “perfect” last line. Again, everything was happy rosy.

Giving it to beta boy, I was worried- he is my harshest critic, but that’s why I like sending my work to him. Everyone else gives me positive comments on everything while beta boy is very good at saying, “This part sucks and here’s why.” (I hate that, but I also need it, you know?)

But a wonderful thing happened: beta boy loved it! He told me I hit the nail on the head with this one and he could easily see this being an excellent end to the story. I reached out to a couple of people who ask to read my work and they, as well, thought it was the proverbial icing on the cake.

Am I happy? Yes. Am I happy with my work-in-progress? Yes. Will it no doubt change during the second draft? Oh, absolutely- but I don’t care now. I’ve come to realize that no one becomes an Olympic swimmer overnight. This is the same for writing, no matter how much we writers don’t want to admit it.
Something is wrong if you aren’t changing things or learning from the feedback you receive. I’ve learned that now, and plan to incorporate this knowledge into all of my writing moving forward. I hope you do, as well. I love to see people rise to higher levels of potential!

One more thing! I have another update coming up within the next couple of days. The monthly Absolute Writer’s blog chain is out and I’m on the docket for one of the next entries. This month’s topic is, strangely enough, “dead bunnies.” Those of you know me in person can expect something ridiculously off the wall with this one!