Saturday, August 18, 2012

Fire & Ice: The August 2012 Blog Chain


Well, vacation is over and here I am. I had a great time and am ready to share some great memories—next week! This week my focus is on the Absolute Write’s August 2012 blog chain.

If you frequent my blog, you’ve no doubt noticed that one a month I participate in this chain, hosted by Orion_mk3/nonexistentbooks. Each month we [participants] vote on a topic and write about it. It’s fun, it’s exposing and it’s a great way to get to know the writing community. I absolutely recommend giving it a shot. You may just make some friends out of it!

This month’s topic is Fire & Ice. Here’s my submission, a two to three minute one-act. At the bottom of this post is a list of the other participants and links to their submissions. Please check them out. You’ll find some great reads as you do!


Fire & Ice


[LIGHTS UP. BILL WAKES UP ON A BED IN A RED ROOM. FIRE CAN BE SEEN OUTSIDE OF THE ROOM’S SOLE WINDOW.  A MAN HOVERS OVER BILL. BILL SITS UP.]

BILL:          “What happened?”

STRANGER: “You died.”

BILL:          “Who’re you?”

STRANGER: “Jim.”
        
BILL:          “Why are you here, Jim?”
        
JIM:           “I’m your devil.”
        
BILL:          “My devil? Does that mean…”
        
JIM:           “Yes. You are in hell.”

[BEAT.]

BILL:          “I just don’t understand this. I was a good person! Why didn’t I get into Heaven?”

JIM:           “Because you didn’t pick the right religion, Jim.”

BILL:          “What is the right religion?”

JIM:           “None of them.”

BILL:          “Then how do you get in?”

JIM:           “You don’t.”

BILL:          “This doesn’t make any sense.”

JIM:           “That’s because you’re dreaming.”

[LIGHTS OUT.]

[LIGHTS UP. BILL WAKES UP ON A BED IN A BLUE ROOM. THE FURNITURE IS MADE OF ICE. A MAN HOVERS OVER HIM. BILL SITS UP.]

JIM:           “Good morning, Bill.”

BILL:          “Jim?”

JIM:           “Yes.”

BILL:          “Where am I?”

JIM:           “Hell.”

BILL:          “Still?”

[BILL GETS UP AND WALKS AROUND THE ROOM.]

BILL:          But it’s freezing here.”

JIM:           “Of course it is. It’s hell.”

BILL:          “I thought hell was a lake of fire?”

JIM:           “That’s what they want you to believe.”

BILL:          “Why would they lie?”

JIM:           “Because, when you’re freezing, a lake of fire sounds pretty damned good.”

As usual it’s a bit out of left field, I know, but isn’t that par for the course by now? I hope you all are having GREAT Augusts. I look forward to catching up on some reading and learning all about what you’ve been up to. I’ll be back to my regularly scheduled programming next Friday. Until then, have a great week!

Best,

—R



LINKS TO THIS MONTH’S POSTS:

randi.lee - http://emotionalnovel.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)

Proach - http://desstories.blogspot.com/ (link to this month's post)
BigWords - http://bigwords88.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)

magicmint - http://www.loneswing.com/ (link to this month's post)
tomspy77 - http://thomaswillamspychalski.wordpress.com/ (link to this month's post)

13 comments:

  1. Welcome back, Randi! It is so good to hear your words again and see the great writing and sense of humor :) Hope your vacation was beyond words of amazing!

    Great! It was simple and fun, carried a message, but wasn't in your face about anything. Once more, it just drew me in and I was just having loads of fun reading it.

    Can't wait for more! I wanna get back to reading your great writing!

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    1. Thanks so much, Paigey! I can always count on you for motivation :) I actually wrote this in eight minutes & don't consider it my best work, so I'm glad someone enjoyed it lol.

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  2. Welcome back! Hope you had a great vacation--I sure did. ;)

    Your piece tickled me because I actually just finished a story involving the afterlife myself, and I have a similar conversation takes place between my main character and St. Peter at the pearly gates. Nice job!

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    1. Oh, that's too funny, JW. Well, you know what they say about great minds ;)

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  3. Very clever! Way to get us thinking about the afterlife. I guess the concept of hell really is basically made up of what our opposite desires would be. :D

    There is no up without down, right?

    Nice job, Randi! Now I'm philosophizing and probably won't get any productive work done until after lunch. But, that's okay. I needed a break! lol

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    1. Oh noes, I didn't mean to deter you from work...but I'm glad the story got you thinking :) Thanks so much, Diane! Greatly appreciated :D

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  4. Clever indeed, Randi_lee! Your sharp wit and creative juices blended together sure makes this a great, fun read. well-written--Cheers!

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    1. Thanks so much, Al! PS--I owe you an email back, haven't forgotten!! :)

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    2. A final thought...whenever you share these interesting, humorous dialogue exchanges in your writings, Randi-lee, I immediately think of two or more famous Hollywood comedians taking centerstage(go ahead, try and keep a straight face imagining the likes of Adam Sandler, Jim Carrey, Will Farrell, feel free to insert your own favorite choice here, etc. delivering/deadpanning these lines...

      Some people are just naturally meant to create, write, etc...keep polishing your gift.

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    3. Al-- I'm going to take that as one of the best compliments I've recieved recently. I'm glad my writing could pull such a response from you. Thanks so much for brightening up my day!!! You're the best!

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  5. As someone who likes to know what's coming (I'm not big on surprises or changing plans at the last minute), not knowing what to expect each time I wake up would be my own personal hell. Nice job! Very creative!

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    1. I meant to reply to your post, but I ended up just placing a new comment on my own blog, ha ha. Anyway, for the sake of you seeing the message, here's what I had to say:

      Thanks for stopping by, Charity! I'm actually more of a "by the seat of your pants-er," so if something unexpected happens to me I just sort of roll with it and see where life takes me. I have mondo respect for your outlook, though. You seem very organized, something I most certainly am not. Thanks again :D

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  6. Thanks for stopping by, Charity! I'm actually more of a "by the seat of your pants-er," so if something unexpected happens to me I just sort of roll with it and see where life takes me. I have mondo respect for your outlook, though. You seem very organized, something I most certainly am not. Thanks again :D

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