Well, vacation is over and here I am. I had a
great time and am ready to share some great memories—next week! This week my
focus is on the Absolute
Write’s August 2012 blog chain.
If you frequent my blog, you’ve no doubt
noticed that one a month I participate in this chain, hosted by Orion_mk3/nonexistentbooks. Each month
we [participants] vote on a topic and write about it. It’s fun, it’s exposing
and it’s a great way to get to know the writing community. I absolutely
recommend giving it a shot. You may just make some friends out of it!
This month’s topic is Fire & Ice. Here’s
my submission, a two to three minute one-act. At the bottom of this post is a
list of the other participants and links to their submissions. Please check
them out. You’ll find some great reads as you do!
Fire & Ice
[LIGHTS UP. BILL WAKES UP ON A BED IN A RED
ROOM. FIRE CAN BE SEEN OUTSIDE OF THE ROOM’S SOLE WINDOW. A MAN HOVERS OVER BILL. BILL SITS UP.]
BILL: “What happened?”
STRANGER: “You died.”
BILL: “Who’re
you?”
STRANGER: “Jim.”
BILL: “Why are you here, Jim?”
JIM: “I’m
your devil.”
BILL: “My
devil? Does that mean…”
JIM: “Yes.
You are in hell.”
[BEAT.]
BILL: “I just don’t understand this. I was a
good person! Why didn’t I get into Heaven?”
JIM: “Because you didn’t pick the right
religion, Jim.”
BILL: “What
is the right religion?”
JIM: “None
of them.”
BILL: “Then
how do you get in?”
JIM: “You
don’t.”
BILL: “This
doesn’t make any sense.”
JIM: “That’s
because you’re dreaming.”
[LIGHTS OUT.]
[LIGHTS UP. BILL WAKES UP ON A BED IN A BLUE
ROOM. THE FURNITURE IS MADE OF ICE. A MAN HOVERS OVER HIM. BILL SITS UP.]
JIM: “Good
morning, Bill.”
BILL: “Jim?”
JIM: “Yes.”
BILL: “Where
am I?”
JIM: “Hell.”
BILL: “Still?”
[BILL GETS UP AND WALKS AROUND THE ROOM.]
BILL: But
it’s freezing here.”
JIM: “Of
course it is. It’s hell.”
BILL: “I
thought hell was a lake of fire?”
JIM: “That’s
what they want you to believe.”
BILL: “Why
would they lie?”
JIM: “Because, when you’re freezing, a
lake of fire sounds pretty damned good.”
As
usual it’s a bit out of left field, I know, but isn’t that par for the course
by now? I
hope you all are having GREAT Augusts. I look forward to catching up on some reading
and learning all about what you’ve been up to. I’ll be back to my regularly
scheduled programming next Friday. Until then, have a great week!
Best,
—R
LINKS
TO THIS MONTH’S POSTS:
Ralph Pines - http://ralfast.wordpress.com/
(link to this month's post)
Catherine Hall - http://theelephantinthetemple.blogspot.com/
(link to this month's post)
writingismypassion - http://charityfaye.blogspot.com/
(link to this month's post)
wonderactivist - http://luciesmoker.wordpress.com/
(link to this month's post)
SuzanneSeese - http://viewofsue.blogspot.com/
(link to this month's post)
randi.lee - http://emotionalnovel.blogspot.com/
(link to this month's post)
Proach - http://desstories.blogspot.com/ (link to this
month's post)
BigWords - http://bigwords88.wordpress.com/
(link to this month's post)
magicmint - http://www.loneswing.com/ (link to this
month's post)
tomspy77 - http://thomaswillamspychalski.wordpress.com/
(link to this month's post)
Welcome back, Randi! It is so good to hear your words again and see the great writing and sense of humor :) Hope your vacation was beyond words of amazing!
ReplyDeleteGreat! It was simple and fun, carried a message, but wasn't in your face about anything. Once more, it just drew me in and I was just having loads of fun reading it.
Can't wait for more! I wanna get back to reading your great writing!
Thanks so much, Paigey! I can always count on you for motivation :) I actually wrote this in eight minutes & don't consider it my best work, so I'm glad someone enjoyed it lol.
DeleteWelcome back! Hope you had a great vacation--I sure did. ;)
ReplyDeleteYour piece tickled me because I actually just finished a story involving the afterlife myself, and I have a similar conversation takes place between my main character and St. Peter at the pearly gates. Nice job!
Oh, that's too funny, JW. Well, you know what they say about great minds ;)
DeleteVery clever! Way to get us thinking about the afterlife. I guess the concept of hell really is basically made up of what our opposite desires would be. :D
ReplyDeleteThere is no up without down, right?
Nice job, Randi! Now I'm philosophizing and probably won't get any productive work done until after lunch. But, that's okay. I needed a break! lol
Oh noes, I didn't mean to deter you from work...but I'm glad the story got you thinking :) Thanks so much, Diane! Greatly appreciated :D
DeleteClever indeed, Randi_lee! Your sharp wit and creative juices blended together sure makes this a great, fun read. well-written--Cheers!
ReplyDeleteThanks so much, Al! PS--I owe you an email back, haven't forgotten!! :)
DeleteA final thought...whenever you share these interesting, humorous dialogue exchanges in your writings, Randi-lee, I immediately think of two or more famous Hollywood comedians taking centerstage(go ahead, try and keep a straight face imagining the likes of Adam Sandler, Jim Carrey, Will Farrell, feel free to insert your own favorite choice here, etc. delivering/deadpanning these lines...
DeleteSome people are just naturally meant to create, write, etc...keep polishing your gift.
Al-- I'm going to take that as one of the best compliments I've recieved recently. I'm glad my writing could pull such a response from you. Thanks so much for brightening up my day!!! You're the best!
DeleteAs someone who likes to know what's coming (I'm not big on surprises or changing plans at the last minute), not knowing what to expect each time I wake up would be my own personal hell. Nice job! Very creative!
ReplyDeleteI meant to reply to your post, but I ended up just placing a new comment on my own blog, ha ha. Anyway, for the sake of you seeing the message, here's what I had to say:
DeleteThanks for stopping by, Charity! I'm actually more of a "by the seat of your pants-er," so if something unexpected happens to me I just sort of roll with it and see where life takes me. I have mondo respect for your outlook, though. You seem very organized, something I most certainly am not. Thanks again :D
Thanks for stopping by, Charity! I'm actually more of a "by the seat of your pants-er," so if something unexpected happens to me I just sort of roll with it and see where life takes me. I have mondo respect for your outlook, though. You seem very organized, something I most certainly am not. Thanks again :D
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